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Navy EVAL Bullet Examples
Opening Statements, Comments
The purpose and goal of the Eval is to accurately and fully describe performance. A laundry list of significant achievements does provide insight into a person's capabilities but it doesn't provide the whole picture. A list of achievements doesn't give any indication as to the character or personality of the person being evaluated. A Sailor might have a long list of impressive accomplishments but, at the same time, be a discipline problem and hard to work with. He or she might be an expert in their rating but the absolute worst at sharing knowledge or getting along with their peers or subordinates. And those social qualities are very important, at least as important as a person's technical skills! So, in addition to describing a person's professional and technical skills, we need to convey to the Eval's reader his social skills, his integrity, his character, his loyalty and other qualities which are not apparent when merely reading a list of accomplishments. The Opening statements or comments is where this facet of performance is described. This statement is very important. It's the first thing the reader sees and sets the tone for the whole Eval. Make sure it has the impact that can't be ignored.
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Senior Chief Petty Officer Smith's inspirational leadership permeates my command. The deep respect he receives from all hands is evidence of his superlative qualities of leadership, integrity, and professional knowledge. His example has fostered unparalleled productivity and esprit de corps. Standing head and shoulders above his peers, P.O. xxx exemplifies the definition of "OUTSTANDING" with every endeavor! Petty Officer ??? has made an immediate positive impact! His/Her leadership has become the cornerstone of AV/ARM Division. PO Jones continues to inspire Saiors to meet and exceed established standards. He instills core values and competencies in tomorrows leaders to meet todays challenges. Deck-plate leadership at its finest! Marked P only due to short time on board and quota restraints. Stellar leadership and exceptional mastery of tactical and technical skills. Clear front-runner for Chief. SN Jones is Third Division's top performer. Since taking over as leading SN he has been nothing but full speed ahead. His ability to use the resources provided to him to complete all assigned tasks is unmatched. SN Collado is already performing at the Third Class Petty Officer level and is ready for the next challenge now. GM1 Name is head and shoulders above his peers, and the finest E6 I've known. He functions as a CPO every single day- the only thing missing are the anchors! Petty Officer Villa readily accepts the most demanding challenges and produces superior results. His tireless devotion to duty inspires and challenges co-workers. Professional, methodical and technically astute. FC2(SW)Sailor consistently leads by example seeking greater responsibility while excelling at the most difficult tasks. A capable and dedicated Petty Officer, he always exercises sound judgement and has displayed strong leadership potential. Continuously reviews actions and strives for improvement of his section. Groom for future position of responsibility. SUPERB CHIEF PETTY OFFICER! Hands-down my number one Chief Petty Officer in the mess! Energetic, dedicated leader whose performance always exceeds my highest expectations. My nominee for promotion under the Combat Meritorious Advancement Program. Promote this warrior now! CPO Pozzi is an enthusiastic, dedicated CPO. She has quickly transitioned from a maintenance background to her new staff duties My best CPO. Developed a hearty Chief's Mess that restored Navy tradition and pride. PROMOTE TO SCPO NOW! Absolute TOP NOTCH in every respect. The only E-6 to attain the title of Senior Watch Officer, a leader in whom I place extraordinary trust! My best CIC Watch Supervisor! Developed and maintained an efficient and motivated watch characterized by professionalism and pride. PROMOTE TO CHIEF NOW! Dependable, motivated, and trustworthy--a SCPO with the courage to manage without visible support PO1 Dooney is a highly qualified PO; directly responsible for uptime rate of over 99% on all strategic communications links; exceeded stringent DISA standards Highly skilled and dedicated professional, performs far beyond expectations; an outstanding asset to the unit Outstanding PO. Crisp military bearing and appearance. Exceeds standards in military courtesies, fitness, and job performance. |
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MY #2 OF 45 FIRST CLASS PETTY OFFICERS! A HIGHLY MOTIVATED, MISSION-ORIENTED LEADER PERFORMING AT THE CHIEF PETTY OFFICER LEVEL! Petty Officer xxx possesses an enthusiastic urge and ability to achieve. He/she is an intelligent, unique leader constantly thriving on new challenges while transferring goals and objectives into concrete, workable plans. Enthusiastic and dedicated, actively seeks out challenges and doggedly pursues them until resolved. He is singled out for jobs that require determination and skill and has improved or corrected many chronic problem areas. He is a shining example to his peers and subordinates. As Chief of the Boat, he has been a superior leader whose innate ability to motivate, inspire and train personnel significantly improved productivity and command performance. OUTSTANDING CPO who is scorching the competition. A true leader. Developed a cohesive Chief's Mess that focuses on the command's success. PROMOTE TO SCPO NOW! Ranked #1 of 5 in Admin department and #4 of 10 assigned. An absolute must select for Chief Petty Officer. My best CIC Watch Supervisor! Developed and maintained an efficient and motivated watch characterized by professionalism and pride. PROMOTE TO CHIEF NOW! A leader with an indefatigable work ethic. Hand picked to be the only E-7 to attain the title of Senior Watch Officer which is usually held by an E-8. He makes the process of managing the Ops Center look easy. Dependable, motivated, and trustworthy--a SCPO with the courage to manage without visible support Highly reliable, indispensable member of our team; well trained and knowledgeable on all spectrums of satellite equipment Ranked # 1 of 6 highly competitive CPOs. Chief Rolex is the most productive and versatile Chief at this Command. He has my complete confidence and is relied upon heavily for all vital network defense decisions for the USCENTCOM AOR. A welcome new addition to the Power Generation workcenter, a seaman with potential. PO1 Dooney is a highly qualified PO; directly responsible for uptime rate of over 99% on all strategic communications links; exceeded stringent DISA standards P.O. Smith is an exceptional Front Desk clerk whose performance of his assigned duties exceeds all requirements. Intelligent and conscientious, he requires neither supervision nor guidance in order to attain superior results. P.O. Smith's long term commitment to the improvement of his duties led him to be one of the top Front Desk clerks at the Combined Bachelors Quarters, Naval Station Pearl Harbor. Highly motivated! Energetic and diligent--demonstrated strong ability to identify, analyze and solve problems |
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