NAVY EVAL Example

* MY #1 OF 3 EXCEPTIONALLY TALENTED FROCKED FORWARD DEPLOYED FIRST CLASS PETTY OFFICERS! *

-DYNAMIC LEADER. Deftly monitored all aspects of the Administrative Department, leading five personnel in the processing of 538 general and technical correspondence documents, 64 Naval messages, 59 directives, 127 personal awards and 132 fitness/evaluation reports resulting in 52 of 52 programs graded as on "On Track" during COMHSCWINGPAC Command Assessment Visit.
-ASTUTE MENTOR. Demonstrated the highest degree of leadership and guidance to 40 Yeoman and Personnel Specialists in drafting legal charges, thereby increasing knowledge necessary for advancement across Carrier Air Wing FIVE. His personal mentorship fostered 100 USMAP enrollments, two advancements, two Enlisted Aviation Warfare Specialists, two Navy and Marine Corps Achievement Medals, one FLOC, and one Blue Jacket of the Quarter.
-COMMAND DEDICATION. As an active member of the FCPOA he delivered Petty Officer 24/7 training and Suicide Prevention/Violent Crimes training during command indoctrination resulting in increased advancement potential and a smooth welcome aboard process for over 30 Sailors.

*** AN IMPRESSIVE SAILOR ON TRACK FOR CHIEF PETTY OFFICER! ***

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