NAVY EVAL Example

*** My 2 OF 22 FIERCELY COMPETITIVE SECOND CLASS PETTY OFFICERS! ***

ENERGETIC SELF STARTER ALREADY PERFORMING AT THE LEVEL OF A SEASONED FIRST CLASS!
EXCEPTIONAL MANAGER. Petty Officer X utilizes his knowledge of the F/A-18E/F aircraft to mentor and train junior Sailors in the pursuit of their qualifications. His personal oversight led to the qualification of seven Quality Assurance Representatives, seven Collateral Duty Inspectors, 15 Final Checkers and 10 Ordnance Team Members, which significantly increased operational readiness.
EXTREMELY STRONG WORK EITHIC. Continually produces excellent work center and program audits, ensuring NAMP compliance for seven aviation maintenance programs critical to safety of flight. As a QAR, continues to actively develop the egress/environmental branch by assisting in maintenance evolution and training.
DEDICATED MENTOR. His expert guidance of work center programs and junior personnel contributed to the command's unprecedented zero off-track with 98.4 percent during the 2015 Commander Strike Fighter Wing Pacific (MPA) Maintenance Program Assist inspection.
Petty Officer X is a superstar and a proven performer. Excels in all endeavors. He has earned my strongest recommendation for immediate advancement to First Class Petty Officer.

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