NAVY EVAL Example

Petty Officer X is an energetic and resourceful technician, who eagerly accepts any task and produces flawless results. A bright and rising star with unlimited growth potential.
- Outstanding technician. Exhibited keen technical expertise in clearing grounds on 3 VRTU's expanding the life of the VDI Cards, saving the command in over 90,000 dollars worth of repairs; Repaired over 30 sound powered telephones, saving the command over 5,000 dollars; Troubleshot and repaired IVCS to full operations after failure and loss of over half the ship's communication; Replaced over 5 LNB's, restoring AFN Network to 100% restoration resulting in ships moral and entertainment.
-Team Player. Part of the training team for Repair Electrician, training up and coming repair electricians for future re certifications.
- Command involved. Part of MWR on board USS San Diego and Naval Base San Diego promoting moral amongst Navy personnel; Part of the planning and production and distribution of 5 bingo nights on board resulting in higher moral for the crew.
Petty Officer X combines abundant natural talent with extraordinary commitment to achieve superior results in every endeavor. Aggressively seeks out additional responsibilities and always achieves outstanding results. Ready now for immediate advancement to Second Class Petty Officer!

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