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Write With Impact

To be effective, every statement in the evaluation should have an impact or positive result listed. If the beneficial result of every action listed isn't explained, the eval's reader won't understand how significant your actions were. But sometimes, it's hard to come up with a positive result for something we do day in and day out. Keeping that redundant generator ready for action doesn't inspire a lot of glory. But actually it is important. The Navy couldn't function without the work that every single one of us performs every day. Below are examples of impact statements that might fit your work.

- $1.6 billion in resources secured - 100% compliant! - 100% success - 50% increase in on-time rates - 95% on-time completion rate, smashed NAVEUR 90% goal - a 50% reduction in required training time - a readiness rate exceeding Navy goal by 5% - a 99% accuracy rate - a historical milestone - a squadron first! - a sustained 95% mission-capable rate - a vital component during semi- annual assessment - accelerated delivery of over $15 million worth of projects - accomplished all learning objectives in 50% less... - achieved "Most Improved Lodging" recognition - achieved 100% accountability of... - achieved a 5.5 average customer rating which exceeded goal - actions landed "best nuclear engineer" award - actions were imperative to mission success - activated network supporting Joint Expeditionary Force - advanced the warfare planning tool by two full years - aided 5 deliveries of over 150K lbs of aid directly to... - aided immeasurably in section’s performance during... - alleviated manning shortage at… - allowed staff to make rapid manning decisions regarding... - allowed immediate resumption of supply requests - amassed over 1000 hours of instruction and… - an invaluable asset for the entire unit - an outstanding 100% uptime rate - and prevented threat to the installation - assisted in coping with multiple conflicts

- assisted Fleet's earning a rating of "Excellent" - assured an atmosphere of mutual trust and respect - assured successful event coverage - at no cost to unit - average turnaround 48 hrs - averted an alert aircraft tail swap - avoided an engine replacement cost of $900,000 - avoided loss or cancellation of over $50M of year end funds - awarded "Sailor of the Month" every month deployed - beat repair estimate by over 12 hours! - became the "gold standard" for other Navy programs - bolstered operations in... - boosted equipment to the next level of acquisition - boosted section repair capabilities - boosted squadron morale - bridged the Supply Chain Management support gap - broke record in maintenance response time - brought program back on track - built and maintained unit morale - capitalized on emerging circumstances! - captured an impressive 15 trophies and seized Best Team - cemented a 100% pass rate - certified over 55 firefighters with zero accidents to date - chosen to manage distinguished visitor events for... - cited as superb and "fastest response time seen to date!"

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